Tuesday, 4 October 2016

week two feedback

What is the purpose of your project?

Just explore and when you start crating you will start to
see where your project could take you.

just plow ahead your progress will steer you in the right place.

only a few weeks left

we need to start visual idea planing.

I asked do we need to do a research document?
Jay said he recommend that we wait till we have finished are project so
that we could use it for are presentation at the end.

If you think that you couldn't of done better in a project than your not a designer.

I showed my script to jay and got this feedback from him.

It's a very personal approach to the brief, he said my next step should be to make storyboards
(which I was planning doing)  mainly to make it more defined as an idea.

My script

The bus driver

EXT Sunny
Start with a bus driving down a road coming to a stop, cut to extreme close up of bus door than as people are walking on the bus to than reveal bus driver, as you see him the door starts to close.
INT Bright
The bus started moving again and everyone on the bus is seated; at this point we only can see from behind the crow of people seated on the bus and not anyone’s face.
EXT Sunny
The bus keeps driving down the road and hits a few bumps, takes a few turn or two and finally comes to another bus stop.
INT Dim
The bus has stopped and the door opens, we see the bus driver seating and he gets up, walks out of the door and out of view. Camera cuts to in side of the bus to all the people that are seated and it’s all the same person just with different clothes, hats, hair styles, and age. One gets up and seats down at the driver’s seat than closes the door.
EXT Sunny

Bus drives off down the road as the screen fades to black and text appears fading in and out on each set of words saying “Your life” “your bus” “your bus driver”

 From this feedback I made a small to-do-list

1 storyboards
2 visual style
3 character design
4 animation
5 research process