With all the feedback I got from the polished first 2 seconds I had a clear mind for what to do. I added a object that goes though most scenes to try and that I made the whole thing myself, there is still going to be a few different types of animation but it's only going be a few so that I don't any just for the sake of it.
The storyboards are very rough but I started to make them digital so that I may be able to start them digital in my next projects. My main goal for this project was to send it off to the RSA and I still might; but I now want to make my goal to be able to make a fully formed animatic. This would be very very useful for any future project alone or with a team for people.
I also have another goal that I'm doing very well on overall, it's documenting my work so that I can have time lapse's of all my work.
